Tuesday, April 24, 2012

Basic Newswriting

Who? Trans Atlantic flight
Who is involved? A first officer, a captain, flight attendants and passengers.
Who does/did the situation affect? Everyone on the plain.
Who said so? Canada's Transportation safety board.

What? A first officer for a plain mistakes a Venus for a C-17 that was just below.
What is happening? He falls asleep and wakes up not feeling well probably clouding his judgment.
What did happen? He brought the plain down and up again at different altitudes.
What are the consequences? Passengers and flight attendants were rapidly thrown around the plain and lost objects .
What is different about this? How it happened, the mistake the first officer made.
What are the choices? They could have woken him up at the normal time and only give him the 40 minuets.

When? January 14, 2011
When did or will this happen? January 14 , 2011
When was this discovered?On the day it happened.

Where? From Toronto to Zurich,Switzerland.
Where did or will this happen? ^^^^ ditto.

Why? He wasn't feeling very well and the light looked like it.
Why did this happen or will it happen?^^^^ ditto

How? He went down and changed the altitude until the captain took action
How did it or will it happen?^^^^^DITTO
How much does it cost?
How many people does this affect? It affected  14 passengers and 2 flight attendants.
How do you feel about this? I feel like there should be more safety actions to insure that something like this doesn't happen again.

Who? 6 year old Salecia Johnson
Who is involved?^^^ , The school principle and a police officer form milledgeivlle Police
Who does/did the situation affect? The school and the people in it.
Who said so?CNN ?

What? A girl throwing a tantrum.
What is happening? She was taken down to the police station
What did happen? She was throwing things and biting and hurting the principle
What are the consequences? She was put in handcuffs and taken down to the police station.
What is different about this? Usually a girl who is so young wouldn't be taken down to a police station
What are the choices? They could have just put her in a room were she cant hurt anyone

When?Friday
When did or will this happen?^^^Ditto
When was this discovered?The day of.

Where?Creekside elementary
Where did or will this happen?Florida

Why? She was throwing a tantrum
Why did this happen or will it happen? They probably couldn't think of any other way to deal with the situation.

How?They called them ?
How did it or will it happen? The police drive her away
How much does it cost?
How many people does this affect? The school , her family.
How do you feel about this? I have never heard a story like this before... its weird.


Who? Austin Fisher
Who is involved? The school board,  people of Facebook, The town, the board , Austins mom, Austins aunt , the principle.
Who does/did the situation affect?^^^^
Who said so?CNN

What? Hes banned from walking at his graduation
What is happening? He missed a lot of school time because he was helping his sick mother and it never got called in.
What did happen? His principle banned him from extra school stuff.
What are the consequences? people stood up.
What is different about this? why he missed so much time
What are the choices? To either let , or not let him walk at his graduation.

When? In the fall of 2011 and later
When did or will this happen?^^^^
When was this discovered? After , and when it was soon to graduation

Where?OHIO
Where did or will this happen?^^^

Why? He had to take care of his mother so he missed a lot of time
Why did this happen or will it happen?^^^^

How? He would drive her around.
How did it or will it happen? he couldn't walk with them so he started telling people and posted things on Facebook
How much does it cost?
How many people does this affect? Him, his mother, the school board.
How do you feel about this? I think he should be able to walk with his class. His mother was sick and he was just doing the right thing by taking care of her.

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